LIFE FEELS

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  • My Feelings

    LIFE FEELS

     LIFE FEELS LIKE POISON RUNNING THROUGH MY VAINS
    I'M SLOWLY BEING KILLED WITH THE NEGATIVITY IN THE AIR
    I'M CONSTANTLY TRYING TO CLEANSE MY SOUL
    FROM THE POISON RUNNING THROUGH MY VAINS
    HOW MANY TIMES WILL I HAVE TO CLEANSE MY SOUL
    UNTIL THE POISON CONSUMES ME AND I DIE
    SUFFICATING. I CAN'T BREATH. I CAN TAKE IT
    ALL THAT IS ME IS SLOWLY DYING
    THIS POISON SEEMS TO WIN THE BATTLE
    I MUST WIN THE WAR
    I MUST FIND THE CURE TO SAVE MY SOUL
    I LOOK UP TO THE SKY
    I SEE MY CURE
    IT IS SHINNING BRIGHT
    IT WARMS MY BODY
    I REACH FOR THE LIGHT
    TO SAVE MY LIFE FROM THIS POISON THAT CONSUMES ME
    LIFE FEELS, LIFE FEELS, LIFE FEELS LIKE ITS WORTH FIGHTING FOR

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    Rhymer commented on LIFE FEELS

    05-13-2010

    Sinful thoughts and sinful deeds can consume our life and our souls. It takes the purity of light to chase the darkness away so we can be free. 10.............................
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    dragonfly1023 commented on LIFE FEELS

    07-08-2009

    life is worth fighting for and discovering the soul is the key. we fall upon our hardest times before that inner connection is usually made but when we do... revelation and holy sh** :D
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    Charo

    07/08/2009

    Just when we think its over or there is no way out, a hand reaches out to pull us up. Holy is right. :)

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