Let me hold your waist
Let me hold your waist will an arm of gold and they will call us both a rainbow.Let me hold your waist
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ladydraeko commented on Let me hold your waist
06-03-2009
- nice imagery in this, very short but to the point. I love reading poems where i can visualize whats being said Keep it up HUGS
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06/03/2009
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BDIsernhagen commented on Let me hold your waist
06-01-2009
- wow... this is a lot shorter than what I expected, but you said it all in that many words... "they will call us both a rainbow...' I'll be thinking of that all day now. beautiful and mysterious.
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06/03/2009
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