King & Queen of Broken Hearts

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    King & Queen of Broken Hearts

    Brand new deck,

    Split the pack,

    I’ll bite your neck,

    You’ll stab my back.

    When that feeling starts,

    Our hands are shown-

    We’ll both break our hearts,

    But we’ll never be alone.

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    blvdobd2009 commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts

    12-09-2010

    Wow, that to me really was discovery....How do you learn to say so much in so few words...That is such a gift....I feel this way almost everyday when I see my boyfriends face....I have the exact same emotion as you have so brilliantly capture...My Goodness....I loved this read
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    knight4696 commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts

    11-10-2010

    Very Clevr AP! :) I like cards .. but love Chess, being a Knight and all .. well Sometimes its best to shuffle before splitting the pack. lol! Love the metaphor! Great job! :) Ken
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    stefy commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts

    10-15-2010

    Hi young guy! I noticed that you`re very talented.this is nice description and i like the metaphor in it.....a clever message indeed:)
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    arronpalmer

    10/16/2010

    Hi there! Thank you so much, yeah I was just playing with simple ABAB rhyme and metaphors. Thanks for commenting:)

    lustfulsoul commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts

    10-14-2010

    The metaphorical content speaks loudly. At face value, this piece offers acceptance of what's there to come, "I’ll bite your neck, you’ll stab my back". Yet, the poem can lead the reader to many routes for discussion. Well done.
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    arronpalmer

    10/14/2010

    I agree LS, and the multi-route reader perception poetry offers that keep me hooked to writing and reading time and time again. Thank you for your kind feedback.

    WordSlinger commented on King & Queen of Broken Hearts

    10-05-2010

    Heaven ya, what a great perspective, lol, jokers in the deck??? ty WS
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    arronpalmer

    10/14/2010

    Haha, yep forgot the Jokers! Was playing around with metaphors- Love is like a game of cards! Thanks for stopping by :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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