Just space...

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    Just space...

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    another page that ink compells,
    tongues of fury over tales.
    written beyond a minds comprehinsion,
    words without crude intentions.
    fairytale endings,
    with dragons breath.
    fire smote down,
    with nothing left.
    far beyond,
    what the eye could see.
    emotions run dry,
    destilling me.
    clouds form with brutal intent,
    disguising the world,
    without a hint.
    minds ponder down,
    forgott'n roads.
    as backs are scar'd,
    from heavy loads.
    just thoughts to feel the page,
    as fingers grip while twirling rage.






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    mathiasthom commented on Just space...

    02-27-2009

    This was your strongest write yet... I wish you'd try to correct your spelling errors though...It detracts from your poetry...Definitely a '10'...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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