Jay

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  • Lost Love

    Jay

    I miss you the last moments were trashed moments
    Because I lacked the ability to retain or decifer
    HIs screaming words ancient as a bible
    I'm cold,I'm stifled, My love couldn't melt the rifle
    I'd melt the rifle you'd still feel the way you felt I could'nt melt the........
    JAY WHERE EVER YOU WENT I'M BENT FOREVER
    MY SOUL LOVES YOU,BY TERRIBLE DEFAULT IT WASN'T ENOUGH

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    StandingBear commented on Jay

    08-21-2009

    A very deep loss when a loved one has passed. Our hearts are with you.
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    cliftondurant commented on Jay

    07-01-2009

    Love is a beautiful thing when you give love you want love in return it was his lost great poem
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    kdavidscott1 commented on Jay

    06-27-2009

    A great poem explaining how much you miss a loved one... KD
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    AIXA commented on Jay

    03-26-2009

    Loosing a love is winning a new experience in life
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    streetprophit11 commented on Jay

    03-21-2009

    I can almost feel the pain and emotion in your word. Its that powerful.
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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