I've Got This Under Control

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    I've Got This Under Control
    I've got ice in my veins,
    my heart is a void.
    I am calculated and calm...
    I will retaliate,
    and fucking annihilate.
    I dont care for pleasantries.
    If its weak, cut it out.



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    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on I've Got This Under Control

    02-04-2009

    I write a lot of dark poetry, this is very good. I don't usually give a 10, ecause almost every poem can be a little better; however this one was short & too the point. I gave a sense of anger, hatred & sounds like the words of a true sociopath! Lov
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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