Incomplete

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  • To My Mclovin "daniel"

    Incomplete

       I sit and wonder what your doing..
    Who your with
      And what your wearing

    And my htoughts they constantly wonder..
    Can't you see, I can't live without you
    Even though I know were you are : I know
    what your doing, And I know who you are with ..

     But I don't think
    I will ever come to the understnading conclusion
    of living with out you...

     You see every other day "if nt every day" some thing
    reminds me of you and I can't get you out of my mind. Anddon't want too really .. Because being with out you : Is like a
           world that doesn't turn...
    A child with no name
    A garden with no rain
    A tree with no fruit
    Apen with no ink
    A me with no     YOU
    I know you understand every word that i speak but my feelings become INCOMPLETE with out you and God, leading me ...i love yu

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    daniel081180 commented on Incomplete

    12-28-2009

    My love. How to say i love you is so hard to do. This poem is so just exactly how i feel and yet i didn't have the words to say it as well as you did my love, my life, my everything. Can't wait till your here and i can show you baby. thank you so much i am such a lucky man to have you...
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    HiddenAngel

    12/28/2009

    we are both blessed

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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