In the club

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    In the club
    I sat at the bar with a drink
    Like a boxer, in my chest
    The exotic music was pumping

    I nodded my head
    And stomped my feet
    Rocked side to side
    To the music beat

    I felt the vibe
    I looked left and right
    And suddenly i saw her
    Looking right at me

    I smiled and waved
    And gave her a wink
    She smiled and nodded her head
    She seemed convinced
    I went over there
    I offered her a drink
    She took it
    Our conversation went off in a quint

    We started dancing
    Under the disco ball
    I woke up and stretched
    This was only a dream
    Thats all.

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    EmoAlexis commented on In the club

    11-18-2009

    thats real good, and kinda sad that its a dream :(
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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