In my Blood-Pool

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    In my Blood-Pool

    How can I speak,
    When you take away my words.
    How can I breath,
    When you take away my breath.

    I love you and I miss you,
    Abhor you and adore you.
    Why wont you get out of my head.
    While I lay upon my bed.
    In my blood-pool of tears

    I cry myself to sleep thinking,
    How could this have gone wrong?
    Everyday falling and falling,
    No one here to make me strong.
    In my blood-pool of tears.

    You see I long for that day,
    That you not stray.
    And just leave me,
    In my blood-pool of tears.

    So until you come back to me,
    I can not speak, for you have my words.
    I can not breath, for you have my breath.
    And I will lay here,
    In my blood-pool of tears.

    Age:16

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    muttman1 commented on In my Blood-Pool

    02-05-2009

    you got skillz hope you know that and never stop writing

    bforibus commented on In my Blood-Pool

    02-04-2009

    wow . i love the dark colors and the pain of longing in this poem. very good write

    silentwhisper commented on In my Blood-Pool

    02-02-2009

    I liked this.not too dark yet very expressive/

    Corinna commented on In my Blood-Pool

    12-08-2008

    Love your passion.!

    Paradice21 commented on In my Blood-Pool

    12-07-2008

    I decided to read this at frist I Thought it was about Death which is something I prefer not to read about much compared 2 anything else. But this was great. A little depressing but Well Written.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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