I'm in too deep

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I'm in too deep

When I see you my stomach tingles
I get this urge that makes me want to take you and a room and have you all to myself
I don't wanna be selfish, it's enough of you to share
If this world were mines, I wouldn't even dare!
Cause I feel you belong to me, you're apart of me.
I'm in too deep...

I work to keep you with me
However, I wonder..
Is this the way it should be?
Am I losing control?
Should I allow this power to take over me?
Am I really that far out?
I'm in too deep...

You make me feel good … Granted!
But thats a temporarily emotion
And when I'm knocked off that ride, I resent you
I guess it's all my fault.
I was warned about you
I ignored the warnings
I got attached too quickly
I'm in too deep...

But I quit you!
I DON'T WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!
This time I mean it
I no longer can take the pain of you ... Alcohol!
I know I'll probably miss that googly feeling you give me
That boost of energy and so called courage you allow me to have
But I need to depart from you cause this is taking a toll on me
I'm losing respect from my friends and my family.
They all say quit that habit, but I'm not sure if I can..
Cause you see I clearly have a issue...
I'm in too deep...

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cheohs commented on I'm in too deep

07-06-2009

I hear that, nice how you flipped it, and I know people who should take this to heart. My vice is love, that's the worst addiction ever lol.

Jume commented on I'm in too deep

06-18-2009

if there is a way in, there is always a way out. Nice confession of self struggle as I seem to feel you. Good to read stuff like this cos of the courage it brings. keep it coming

mysticmynd commented on I'm in too deep

06-16-2009

snap snap snap..., what more can I say other than there were two words that should be edited.Great job

goldenbdapoet

06/17/2009

which two words?

Romano commented on I'm in too deep

06-16-2009

DAMN I love how you switch that up, that was real and true to so many with any addiction of any kind

goldenbdapoet

06/16/2009

Thank you, I thought that would have some minds bozzled.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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