I'm a Human Being

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  • Death

    I'm a Human Being

    This is one of god’s creatures in the tree
    Why do you want to have a fire fight with me

    I’m a Human being

    I am a boy on the ground dead God
    Please don’t let them take me down

    I’m a Human Being

    Fruit rotting on the trees
    Land of such complexities
    Hot light flickering through
    Blinding heat of the morning sun
    Trench Mouth determination
    Day Begun

    I’m a Human Being

    O’ my God hit the ground
    Can’t you see that Gook in the tree

    I’m a Human Being

    Fire Flashed Rat a tat tat
    Spraying death all around
    Legs and arms flying
    New thudding sounds
    Blood soaked eyes
    Dying cries

    I’m a Human Being

    Frenzies tension happened so fast
    Grabbed my weapon Rat a tat tat
    Branches flew back
    Dead man in the tree

    I’m a Human being

    A blood shot tear was shed
    Fruit rotting on the trees
    Only the black grandioso black worms
    could I see
    `
    Something’s gone inside of me
    ~
    I’m a Human Being

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    LeslieMay commented on I'm a Human Being

    11-18-2009

    Wow. This is totally deep. War poem, I assume? You are quite the writer.

    cottonluv commented on I'm a Human Being

    02-15-2009

    nice pant.good work

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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