I see

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    I see
    I see her in the darkness
    I see her in the light
    I see her in my dreams
    I see her in the clouds
    I see are children
    I see us
    I see her, hair as dark as midnight, Skin as beautiful as carmel
    I see a smile beautiful enough to make my heart skip a beat
    I see my soul mate
    I see my wife
    I see my peace of mind
    I see my goddess

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    Artie commented on I see

    04-30-2010

    I like the general feeling of this piece. You use your words well - 10 from me
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    kinghur

    04/30/2010

    thanx man it helps put out more work with positive comments

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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