I Rhyme With Hate

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  • Death

    I Rhyme With Hate

    I Won't ever give in Again

    Your smile is always Lying

    It's odd

    That I was Ever even Trying

    I'll just put an end to all Love

    Because there is no God

    Up there Above

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    OriginalCyn commented on I Rhyme With Hate

    08-21-2009

    Very well written. Sad and dark though, but I know sometimes even the best of us feel broken.
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    KristyLoren commented on I Rhyme With Hate

    08-21-2009

    Read my profile when you have a chance, and please believe there is a Great and wonderful God above, I should be ashamed but I get mad at him too, but he has also given me wonderful things in my life and Kudos on your writing, short yet very deep and interesting. NICE work
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    jademelissa74 commented on I Rhyme With Hate

    08-20-2009

    At face value this poem is fearful, dark and very sad. In my reality there is a wonderful God that loves you beyond comprehension. I am not trying to preach :) Your poem is conveyed with darkness. Fulfilling your "Death" tag. Great job!
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    connsk8 commented on I Rhyme With Hate

    08-19-2009

    ah, but there is, first you must find it in your self, sweetie...
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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