I Quit The Game Before It Began

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I Quit The Game Before It Began

Tornados have never been my cup of tea
I don't quite get them, wild as they may be.
And though it may be hard for you to understand:
I quit the game before it began

I let them go easily, the secrets I keep
I just usually sprint forward, and then take the leap
And it’s not because of you folks, that I feel guilt
But I left the building before it was built

I want to try it out, to have part in the fun
For if I don’t, I think the chance might soon be gone
And it’s not eternal sunshine, nor happiness I seek
But I spoke these words before I could speak.

This is the prettiest place that I’ve ever seen
But that’s because this is the only place I’ve ever been
And it’s not because you don’t turn me, with all your talk
But I ran the distance before I could walk

I don’t know quite what I want to say
I just stare out the window all day
And you may see I have a broken romance
But I gave up before I got the chance

Well I guess all this was what I could predict
I just hope there are some minds that I’ve tricked
And it’s not because I know my fate
But I wrote these lines before it was too late.

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erroneousflint commented on I Quit The Game Before It Began

01-30-2011

This write captures everything that makes for great poetry......

KristianDolberg

01/30/2011

Wow, that is huge words! Thank you very much!

stigbohnolsen commented on I Quit The Game Before It Began

01-15-2011

This is as close to perfection as it's gonna get Kristian. This definantly resonanted with me. Easy 10

KristianDolberg

01/15/2011

Thanks alot! This is the channeling of a great idea, that went very well. (Like we talked about)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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