I Miss

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I am a member of Original Poetry from what we from then call the Glory Days. I have been away from this site for 4years now, and it kills me. I was a member for at least 2years prior to leaving. I was a weekly winner who was published in the Original Poetry Anthology Part 1. I loved this place, along with so many others. It is but a shadow of its former self, if that. I hope one day they can turn this place back into the haven we used to have here.....

I Miss

I miss the joy I used to see;
Share by the others here, with me.
The joy, the pain, the anger and fear;
Put out in the open, for all to see and hear.
Its done now, our haven is destroyed;
Thusly our poets are all deployed.
They're all gone now, I'm left alone;
And my haven is still breaking, crumbling stone.

My window is in shambles, as I haven't been here;
The shudders are broken, falling with my fear.
The window sill is cracking, breaking my trust;
The glass is shattered, along with any will of must.
My haven is breaking, and I can't fix it still;
No matter how hard I try, no matter my will.

I miss my friends, all the people that I once knew;
Some have left, unknowing I miss them, without a clue.
I'd rewind time if I knew this would be;
So that I wouldn't lose touch, them I could still see.
I miss my haven....

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toredbloodink commented on I Miss

03-14-2017

Wow hope as I am still redbloodink. You are hope and I still have hope in you... Faith in God above I hope you know you are loved... Come back and see me hear under another new name but I still care....

HopeOhlarik

01/29/2018

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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