I miss you baby!

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    Today my boyfriend went to court. It is a high poosibility that they will put him in jail for six months. At 9:09 AM on March 2nd, 2010 He went into court. Six months is the least sentance. I pray to god that he doesnt get that. I need him. and his child needs him!

    I miss you baby!

     I will miss you.
    Today is the day your sentence is.
    If you go to jail. I will have to live without you for six months.
    I dont know if i can live without you for that long.
    I already miss you dearly.
    My head is spinning.
    My heart is racing.
    My life feels as though its ending.
    I want you.
    I want you to hold me at night.
    God i miss you so much.
    You have no idea how much!
    I love you
    With everything in me
    I will come see you every second i can.
    If i could i wouldnt leave you.
    Six months...
    Its so long.
    I love you.
    God i pray
    Dont let him go.
    I need him.
    I need him!
    Please give the jurry compassion and have them choose to not put him in jail.
    God, please!
    I am crying out to you.
    Please!

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    KShanay commented on I miss you baby!

    03-03-2010

    I wrote a poem like a year ago called "Hey Baby, I Miss You"... Funny thing is I wrote it in the middle of the night... As soon as I woke up... You write exactly what comes to your head... And I think that is a good thing... You said "I need him, I need him!" Because that's what you felt in your heart... I admire your writing...
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