i love him

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    • wat is wrong with me, why does every guy break my heart

    i love him

     we used to be so happy but now i feel so crappy

    i dont know wat happened our love it felt so fastened

    i wish he would hold me in his arms and keep me safe from harm

    i love him i love him oh i love him so much, his smile his beauty his inteligence and such

    he is the guy from my dreams, oh how much to me he means!

    i wish he felt like me, but we will never be

    this feeling will never subside, when i see him i try to hide

    he knows how i feel, how my heart will never heal

    its no longer me and him, because he cheated and i was dim

    i dumped him that day, but now i must say

    i was foolish and dumb, my heart is now numb

    im nothing without him, my life is dim!!


                              I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!

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    jesusfreake commented on i love him

    07-27-2009

    Grrrr...this poem reminds me of those years of heart break from having ur first love crushed...ppl always say its puppy dog love, but when ur broken and left to pick up the peices it feels like more than that...what a wonderful and touching poem...i wish i knew where he lived...;) ahem, anyway great poem....!
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    esha commented on i love him

    06-24-2009

    girly if he is willing to cheat... you need to be willing to leave... alot of ppl ask girls who have this problem "Why do they stay" but i ask "why does he cheat" nobody deserves that and im sorry you had to endure it :] sweet writes i like them keep writing im always willing to read:]
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    DarkAngel666 commented on i love him

    06-24-2009

    I have to completely agree with Liz on this one. Very beautiful poem though. Keep up the good writing.
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    Sydney commented on i love him

    06-24-2009

    this is an excellent poem. but you are very special, unique, and beautiful. you can learn how to heal. just be strong for yourself and you can survive a broken heart.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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