I dream of you

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    who said guys can't do romance

    I dream of you

    I dream of you as the last gasp of daylight fades to grey

    And the array of diamonds set off the encrusted moon

    I dream of you as neon signs give there dancing colourful displays

    And the symphony to life they bring, even in the still of night

    I dream of you as I stretch out my hand, to caress your thigh even when you aren’t there

    And warm imaginings of your body next to mine

    I dream of you as the speckled sunshine raises her golden smile to greet the day

    And the energy your love brings to me

    I dream of you as my eye lids open and close

    And security it brings meaning to every part of my life

    I dream of you as I sit on a hill drinking in nature’s beauty

    And smile to myself knowing that she pails before you

    I dream of you as I look at the tight red bud of a rose

    And smell its sweet scent as within its petals our love grows

    © Phil Golding   Feb 2006

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    Teardrops commented on I dream of you

    10-16-2010

    I feel and see the love you have for your special one well done my friend Marie
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    winterkou commented on I dream of you

    10-16-2010

    What a beautiful descriptive poem, i applaud you on this great write.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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