I don't know

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  • Lost Love
    • MelzLovesU
    • is inlove with him and soo happy now cuz i have him!

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    This is based on my broken heart.

    I don't know

     I don't know what to do
    This is oh so rough
    why do this to you
    for mr to decide is tough
    don't want to dump him
    not at all
    my life light nearing a dim
    I feel I'm going to fall
    my heart shattered
    broken apart
    so many pieces
    I don't know where to start
    almost dead
    falling apart
    so many pieces from my heart
    what should I do I love him so
    don't want to hurt you
    so much you should know

    By: Melaney Friesel

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