I choose U

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  • Devotion
    • Knwldge
    • enjoy the moment, cause it only lasts for a second.

    I choose U

    I choose u, for ur laugh, ur smile, I need u to be there, so our love can over power all the hate in the air. I need u to give me advice from a lighter point of view, so its not just anger that gets expressed out here. I feel like i need u like i need air, or a drummer needs a snare, or an alcholic needs a beer, you make it so that i wanna be here, and look n2 the future instead of yester-years

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    FreeGee commented on I choose U

    01-11-2011

    I love the flow of this....very sweet..reminds me of a love song
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    cheronld commented on I choose U

    12-31-2010

    "Ya got mad skills and a swagger like no other" ..... keep the writes coming my friend....Oh Yeah....forgive my slang if I put in the wrong way....Old Age is catching up on me....lol....Cher
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on I choose U

    09-22-2010

    Choice is a powerful thing and using this power to choose someone to give yourself to is beautiful. Well done! Good read!
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    cheronld commented on I choose U

    05-07-2010

    I like the flow here it was down to earth and simply expressive in a real way...
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    Knwldge

    08/27/2010

    Thank u, i take all the advice and criticism i get, the lucky one is u always remember that, check my new one titled my backbone, its not like the rest of my poems but its from my heart

    icu2 commented on I choose U

    12-07-2009

    Nice job...I feel the same way about my baby..............ten
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    Knwldge

    12/21/2009

    glad i could connect

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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