I can see you

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  • Death

    I can see you

     I can see you, and I can feel you, but you are not there.

    I lost you, but I held on to you until I knew the pain, I had to bare.

    You were the light that made me feel whole, the first one who was a part of my soul.

    I will feel you and love you until the day that I die, but God knows, I need to say good-bye.

    I'll hold you in my dreams and will never really let you go, but can't let losing you make me feel so low.

    I can see you, and I can feel you, but you are not there.

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    nu2ya2000 commented on I can see you

    07-04-2009

    you have an amazing capability of capturing vast feelings many feel after the deaths of loved ones. I can relate so thanks. you practically took my feelings and gave them amazing inspirational words that i can 't seem to express ever.Basically: AWESOME JOB!!! :)
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    bjmom65

    07/07/2009

    Thank you. You are my only comment, but you inspire me!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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