I can hear silence....
As I lay on this hill and look at the stars. I feel my pain being washed away, I feel no scars. As I lay on this hill and think so deep I think of all god's creations and can't help but weep. Every thing is so peaceful and I can't hear a word. Ok! I kinda hear a cricket and maybe a flying bird. But I can hear silence in wind that flows I see thousands of shining star and the moon as it glows I can't discribe how stars make me feel I can talk and talk and there always there to hear and it helps me heal. I feel so whole. I fee like a new soul. The airs so clean and pure. It could just be my hearts cure. I deeply breath it in As I feel the cold breez sweep across my skin God's creations are so amazing So many wonderful thing, I can't stop gazing.. and I canät help but start praising.. I can hear silence in the wind that flows I see thousands of stars shining and the moon as it glows .I can hear silence....
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cmlestrade commented on I can hear silence....
08-22-2009
- I am happy that some of your pain is finally leaving you and I can hear it in your poetry. This poem about nature made me realized how blessed I was just to be able to look out the window and see all of God's wonders.
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icarus0580 commented on I can hear silence....
08-17-2009
- I really really like this. It expresses a true feeling of being freed from life's burdens. The sounds you hear when all the other sounds are gone. How your mind wanders as you gaze. A very nice piece...
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