Hopelessness

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    Hopelessness

    Hopelessness, oh what a feeling

    To have hopelessness is not so appealing

    For days on end I wondered if this feeling would ever go away

    So I fell to my knees and began to pray

    I am so sad, I am so blue---

    I just don't know what to do

    Then I prayed another prayer that the Lord will get me through

    I prayed that I wouldn't pull the trigger

    But my thought of ending it all kept getting bigger

    Lord forgive me if I follow through

    I ran out of patient, instead of running to you

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    jesusfreake commented on Hopelessness

    12-22-2009

    wow...the ending is so deep...there is so much faith in u that I'm so glad to have noticed...u get the whole idea of trusting God and I love how u always express that trust in ur poems...especially in this one...this is so beautiful and powerful as well...
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    Rygar commented on Hopelessness

    11-23-2009

    i think the title is very appropriate for the feelings here, well written and a sorrowful joy to read.
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    1990lh commented on Hopelessness

    10-02-2009

    wow butthead i really relate to this sometimes things r just to much and u just want it all to go away u dont wanna think about the consequences of ur actions u just want the pain to go away, cuz every day seem never ending and full of so much hurt, and your just feel lost. although its hard to do, and, i need to do this myself, u have to try to let go of all that go and put it in God hands, excellent write butthead
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    1990lh

    10/02/2009

    how da hell u have an 8.6 u sould have an 10, haters always hating.:0)

    NoLeafOfClover commented on Hopelessness

    07-07-2009

    You I read this and I also read your other work, to be honest I felt and liked the oppeness if there is a such a word. Very open and honest, and maybe overwhelming, and thats in a good way. Thank you man keep writing.
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    kmeadows commented on Hopelessness

    06-22-2009

    Very good Seven, very honest. I can feel the hopelessness in the aura, I hope that if this is a real feeling for you, that you are able to turn towards God instead of giving up. Great job on the poem, and good for you for staying so strong!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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