hope unto the

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    hope unto the

     friggid air with natures scorn
     unto the earth a newbabe born,
    clinging to a beating heart
     having to choose a living art,
    for choice in the matter our eye plainly see's
     is but a life of hypocracy,
    asking aloud-will we ever understand
     the sorrow within joy-letting go of demand,
    hope is the only pill fit for consumption
     feeding it unto ourselves a national disfunction,
    our forces lie divded as one
     a fools game the powers have spun,
           trigger of man 
                 should not be trigger in hand,
    unity of neighbors a forgotten plan
     only together could we ever make a stand...... 

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    dherrington commented on hope unto the

    07-12-2009

    very original...very realistic...definitely worth adding to my favorites...i would suggest using spellcheck though...the misspellings tend to be a bit distracting.
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    strangefellow

    07/12/2009

    i'm not really good with computers-i dont know how to use spellcheck yet but i'm learning

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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