Honda Car and Now

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    Poem Inspired by a rainy day... and a trip to a beauty supply store.

    Honda Car and Now

     Rain hard, wipers clear our view
    This Maya storm is dense
    The clock marks the mechanical time

    Hair, hair, everywhere 
    A massive attack on what is seen
    Our field of vision filled with replica human heads
    Color, sticks, all kinds of cover
    To change what is naturally here
     

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    Hiporlacking commented on Honda Car and Now

    02-10-2010

    I'm glad I came across this. I recently wrote a poem on a randrom drive as well. I dig your perspective.
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