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over and over i try and try

but it seems your needs i cant satisfy

it seems no matter what i do

nothing will ever be enough for you

 

i hide my pain between the lies

so that way you don't have to try

to understand the pain i feel

and all my wounds that need to heal

 

though i grasp upon every hope

that one day you wont be so cold

one day i wont be so weak

that day i might just let you see

 

let you see,

this hidden side of me

this side no one truely see's

they always see the actress me

 

the cover i use to hide the pain

act? facade? their both the same

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girlygirl1234 commented on hide

05-27-2011

wow...all i can say is wow that is truly an mazing poem. you put everything into this poem and it was marvelous...good write!....GG

amithissecret

06/09/2011

thanks!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

amithissecret’s Poems (31)

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