Hatred And Darkness

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    Hatred And Darkness

      Will drama, hatred, darkness of the heart ever end? If it will stop, never, the hate, drama will always be there. I am sick and tried of the conflictin this world, will it ever end. Maybe, if we stop hating: the darkness will decree, I have a feeling it will not decree. It will increase as long as there is hatred in the world, will this end? I wish all this darkness end or suck up the world, feels like it will never end. All this darkness is making me sick and tired, what to end all this suffering.
      The pain hurts the sickness is increasing, wait the darkness to slip way and leave this world. Their is so much hatred and darkness, will it ever end? Maybe, maybe one day, who know the answer, God and his forgotten son.

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    optimistic commented on Hatred And Darkness

    11-29-2010

    This poem is very powerful well thought out. Just a couple of comments some parts kind of sound like a journal entry. I love the critism at times it helps me as well please critique.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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