Hallowed Ground

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    Hallowed Ground

    I think of this now as hallowed ground.
    The bed on which my father was found.
    I cannot sleep next to my mother anymore,
    the way I used to do before.

    My father lied here in death,
    it was where he enjoyed his last long breath
    and I think of it now as hallowed ground
    and I can't sleep here, I won't sleep sound

    My sweet father died right next to Mom
    and we all cried although we held vigil
    all through the night.
    Still the time is never right,
    one is never prepared
    to lose the man who was your flesh and blood
    and whatever he had, he shared.

    Rest in Peace, Daddy
    1912-2006

    by Donna Lee Copman

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    skyhallow123 commented on Hallowed Ground

    02-13-2014

    This is beautiful. You've put yourself in a vulnerable spot and that's what poetry is all about for me. R.I.P

    Emptykay commented on Hallowed Ground

    04-01-2009

    Please note: "My father lay here" reads better than "My father lied here"

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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