Had I Known

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  • Lost Love

    Had I Known

    Had I known how brief our time would be
    I would have worried less about tomorrow
    lived for today
    Had I forseen my last words spoken to you would be hurtful
    I would have chosen them differently
    making sure the depth of my love
    was thoroughly expressed
    Had I realized that I wuld not see you ever again
    I would have savored each second holding you
    memorizing ever detail of you
    Had I sensed that tomorrow would not come for us
    I would have overlooked the meaningless irritants
    focused solely on US
    Had I known......

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    redbloodink commented on Had I Known

    02-02-2010

    wow! " Had I Known" beautiful........ Made me remember some lost ones... Toke my breath away..... red

    countrypoet commented on Had I Known

    10-12-2009

    Hindsight is an emotion which we have all felt at one time or another and is a good reason why we should treasure the special moments that we share with the people we care about. This poem has a simple logic and inspires the reader to cherish the special moments of life.Nicely done.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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