grandmother
As I sit here by the hospital bed watching my grandmother slowly slip away as i cry she slowly dies poof nothings there but a pile of ashes in the hospital bed the hospital bed she once laid in......
grandmother
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Tags: Death
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scrye commented on grandmother
06-17-2009
- I am so sorry for your loss. Its good you found writing its a really great way to exercise demons that can eat alot of peoples souls. Keep writing I am dieing of liver cancer so I can completely connect with this piece.
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Shelby commented on grandmother
03-05-2009
- Just gets to the point, I actually like it. You expect more drama but it's just boom, dead. And very casual. Good job!
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