A Goodnight Haiku

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    A first Haiku i wrote.

    A Goodnight Haiku

    I just close my eyes.

    Wishing  you here at my side.

    In this so  calm night.

     

    You may not be here,

    But as long as my heart  beats,

    Your presence I feel.




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    icu2 commented on A Goodnight Haiku

    10-20-2009

    This is very romantic and endearing........also very clever Haiku!
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    jammaekas

    10/21/2009

    Thanks Ani:) I only made it a try....

    Lolee commented on A Goodnight Haiku

    10-05-2009

    This is so beautiful! You have taught me something. I am going to try to make a poem all out of Haiku's. You did a lovely job on this.
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    jammaekas

    10/21/2009

    Thanks Lolee:) I already read a Haiku that you wrote, that's an excellent try...!!!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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