Goodbye

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  • Sadness
    • hippiegirl
    • I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not

    Goodbye

     I gave you my heart
    and you ripped it out
    told you my dreams
    and you shot them down.
    You tore me apart
    now I am lonely...
    you killed me inside...
    now i feel nothing.
    You put me in solitary confinement
    I really feel as if i'm dying.
    I can't do this anymore
    I'm dead to the world
    Goodbye, my love, we are no more.

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    alb29oclfl commented on Goodbye

    03-24-2010

    a gift of love a most wondered gift, a sadness prevails for those who can not partake of it's bounty, hate must destroy, it has no other purpose, nicely conveyed
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    earthly commented on Goodbye

    03-24-2010

    Isn't great to write? Poetry can be so many things-it can speak about our emotions-conveyed well can enlighten us and provide us with a safe way to rant, vent,cry,smile,think....AND anyone who ever mistreats is not worth being with-Namaste...Earthly
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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