gone.

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    gone.

    saddness dwells within mah soul...
    emptyness fills mah heart...
    happyness escapes mah grasp...
    the cold continues to linger in mah presence...
    the only thing i wished for...
    stolen away by the only person who could give it to me...
    a true smile

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    WordSlinger commented on gone.

    05-09-2009

    Very original, I like the dialect/lingo of mah So this is a mah good poem, I gave it a 9

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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