Giving Up

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  • Death
    • cierrabb
    • is here about to play a game with mii friends

    Giving Up
    Bleeding through my veins
    Like a bullet in my brain
    Blood rushing down my arms
    Wondering when it will end
    Wanting to leave so fast,
    Looking at my blood run down the glass
    Leaving a trail behind
    Just wanting my life to rewind
    Seeing the light,
    Wanting it so dear
    Never had the courage
    Only fear.

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    IAMLIKEU commented on Giving Up

    05-16-2009

    I HAVE FELT LIKE THAT ONLY NEVER PUT IN VERSE. YOU HAVE MORE COURAGE THAN YOU THINK.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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