Ghosting

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  • Abandonement
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  • Loss
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    This starts with a person on his/her death bed, they know their dying, they can see their loved ones fading away, and they try to hold on, but that backfires, turning said person into a ghost. They are trying to find anyway out of 'in between' even hell, but it's too late, that person is ghost now and will never find peace. If the lines 'Look for hell, or some way out' count as god bashing please let me know, I'm christian, and it doesn't bother me, but if some of you do find it insulting, I'll take it out right away, I don't mean to offend anyone.

    Ghosting

     Ghosting slowly,
    The world fading,
    Life leaving,
    Heaven taking,
    Tears fall,
    Angels call,
    Reach out,
    Last time,
    Seeing others,
    Start to cry,
    I am gone,
    They know,
    I feel that sorrow,
    Wake up,
    Throw a punch,
    Goes through,
    Scared you,
    Cold spots,
    Lost pots,
    Dead now,
    I know,
    Seek heavens door,
    End up on the floor,
    Look for hell,
    Or some way out,
    Too late,
    No escape,
    Ghost now,
    Ghost forever,
    Why didn't I just go to heaven?

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    Solaris commented on Ghosting

    05-04-2013

    I cannot express how deeply your poetry cuts into my soul I have not for a long time read such poetry that equals to surpasses my own emotional prowess. I love it and wish to see much more of your writings.
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    dahlusion commented on Ghosting

    01-14-2013

    a powerful and creative collection of your feelings. Bravo!
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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