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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Far out stuff here. |
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The FraternityThe autumn night air was brisk and sharp, |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2An edited version of an older poem... Last edited by kah 01-18-2011 at 11:00:19 PM |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Dark Desires |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Silver and Blood, Robes and Bones |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Master and Savior Last edited by kah 01-19-2011 at 07:27:21 PM |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Kim [To kah], |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2We love to do this to you, but we need all of these posts sent to |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Wazzup all- Last edited by Artie 01-24-2011 at 10:47:29 PM |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2lol, I had china scan the site, and this page. |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Hello Poets of Blood we need you to send these poems to our email. |
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In Darkness Alike...Revenge of Darkness |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2I'M BEGGING YOU GUYS, PLEASE DON'T PUBLISH VOL 2 UNTIL YOU'VE GOTTEN IT INDEPENDENTLY[/b] EDITED! VOLUME 1 WAS AN UNMITIGATED DISASTER |
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RE: RE: RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Quote: Originally Posted by kah Originally Posted by Marsink DEGRADATION OF DOUBT Trapped by distortions in my pit, alone No gauge to proportions, I drop like a stone A hush, stealth of silence is prying about Assault of said predator, unyielding, is doubt Peering from behind The door of this cell Deeper and darker Than all I can tell By darkness is cloaked Mauling with pain And roaring of sins Exposed once again Eye to a pinpoint Desperate for light With a thrust is a clashing Failed thrashing to fight Flashes of vanity fan out my dark blind Ashes of insanity blow through my mind The keeper of sobriety is nearly gone I quiver near battles’ front As confidence turns to run Dissension’s onslaught between right and wrong Is shouting my thoughts to a cold-faced throng Perceptions of jeering to fearing words vexed Prospect without cheering: death follows next To cope for this sinner is kneeling to pray Hope all the thinner is shearing away The sides of my pit are steeped in my crimes The tides rise of doubt, drowning my time Defiance from worry and fretting despair Have struck me with fury, and quench feeble prayer The prospect of solace laughs in my face As younger and stronger disparage grace At an opportune moment will be in my place In frenzied exhaustion--I forfeit this race A deep look into a man's tortured soul...can our wrongs ever be righted? Is self-forgiving allowed? And the next generation, built on the previous one's sins...destined to repeat the wrongs again and again. Loved this - great imagery, too! What is this, the last stanza? ..."disparage grace"? This is a syntax problem, and mars the rest of theis otherwise fine poem. You must fix this!!!! |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Sometimes, tears are |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Sepukku, now! For thee, thy master, |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Disease, my label holds true! |
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RE: POB Bleed for a Cause Volume 2Pluto's Kingdom |
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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA