Where Have You Been?... looking for feedback
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Where Have You Been?... looking for feedbackI wrote this poem a while ago, but when I look back on it now I feel like it's not right. I still feel my writing is a bit too amateurish. Any comments/critiques/suggestions on this piece or any of my other ones would be greatly appreciated. |
Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.
Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.