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In The Darkest Winter Was Night Tornado Blue

01-29-2010 at 07:46:47 PM

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snow laden birch and willows that weep,
silenced the night the howling winds creep

01-29-2010 at 07:50:54 PM

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Where did you come from, Rygar, I'm glad your ok
Do you know of anywhere around here that is safe?

01-29-2010 at 07:58:17 PM

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I'm so damm cold, you all must be freezing, I shall build a fire
Much debris around, determination is survival that transpires

01-29-2010 at 08:27:04 PM

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i blew in on the whim of the wind,
no place is safe, for safety's a sin.

01-29-2010 at 09:13:47 PM
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The fire is roaring to match the wicked wind blowing
Mother Nature's angry seeds, she is resolutely sowing,

01-29-2010 at 09:41:09 PM

In The Darkest Winter Was Night Tornado Blue

We are caught out in the open, we must look for a ditch
Immediately, we must find one, hear the train like pitch?

01-29-2010 at 09:47:02 PM
  • kah
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The train whistle calls, fills the chaotic night air
My soul fills with yearning to be gone from here

01-29-2010 at 10:09:54 PM

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Oh! if it were only a train!
instead of the winds whipping with rain.

01-30-2010 at 09:11:58 AM
  • kah
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Rygar, it is! Hurtling toward us, our racing salvation!
Everyone, run! Furious winds churning, our feet must hasten!

01-30-2010 at 10:39:52 AM

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Ok, this is not a model train, when we jump on, hold on tight
make sure you don’t slip because you can be sure you’ll die

01-30-2010 at 11:06:59 AM

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Crying in the night, dying in their dreams, flying in the shadows
Awakening, silent screams, you feel their means, night tornadoes

01-30-2010 at 11:10:39 AM

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Pullman cars hustling, reckless with need,
racing God's fury, matching its speed.

01-30-2010 at 11:27:53 AM
  • CorinthiaSugar
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I’m out of breath, hanging on the ledge with tire
Legs dangling free, my arms are ready to expire

01-30-2010 at 11:37:20 AM

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The door on a boxcar slams, cuts her in half, we are drenched in blood
We are the slaughter in the house like a calf, we need the next car scud

01-30-2010 at 12:27:40 PM

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Clank-Clank of freights as the wheels pass over the rails
We made it aboard without being killed, we’ve prevailed

01-30-2010 at 01:07:53 PM
  • kah
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Frightening glee screams from the storm on our heels
I feel the train cars lurch, wind ripping at their wheels!

01-30-2010 at 04:59:25 PM

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with the blood running down tracing a path,
this death ride collides with Ma' natures wrath.

01-30-2010 at 10:05:56 PM

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Crash-Smash, we have become deaths splendid taste' ale
Mmmm, You can taste the storm, we are it’s finest cocktail

01-30-2010 at 10:07:56 PM

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This is a freeze marker to the website of originalpoetry.com.

Thank you, Alexia...and the Poets of Blood

02-03-2010 at 09:18:11 PM

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Meanwhile only two of the three things that touched the ground
have subsequently been heard of since BUT there's two more around.

02-08-2010 at 12:25:45 PM

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Please read and comment, on the current Poets of Blood Creations.

http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/Bleed4aCause

Alexia & the Poets of Blood

P.S. these posting here as seperate work, are fantastic, and are very much considered in the final published work.

03-07-2010 at 12:26:43 AM

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Too bad they died in the fierce twister
Perhaps they could have been rescued had I learned of this earlier

09-09-2010 at 04:13:53 PM

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Thank all of you for the poem.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.