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Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.

01-27-2010 at 11:34:50 PM

Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.

I'm am curious about other peoples ideas of poetry. Where the feeling comes from, if your poems are driven by emotion alone, was there a traumatic experience, or like me just writing what the voices in your head tell you to?

01-29-2010 at 09:22:25 AM

RE: some of the internal voices


Like a Mayan Sunset, when all be sleeping
before Easter Sunrise, they went a creeping
wascal wabbits in me head, dropping egglettes to be read
sneaky little cowards, only coming out to be fed....

02-03-2010 at 08:47:26 AM

RE: Your comment about hearing voices in your head ...

I do not hear *audio* voices in my head... but I do think choices ... and like a movie premiere, I watch... attempting to understand the consequence of my behavior in each scenario.
And while I haven't officially been diagnosed as having a Multiple Personality Disorder, I... myself, have identified at least 3 personalities within me
There is immature me that likes to regress to our depressed state....
and then there is adult me who wakes up refreshed and demands we get up for what we know is Not a dress-rehearsal... it is our day...
and then there is impetuous me... who likes to play much too often and has little patience for slow people... thinking at times, they must be rocks and not even a slap would wake them up.
Thankfully, none of us are violent.... but our poems are driven... mostly by the major events.. we each get them --- in jail or in a hill-sided view of Hollywood's ocean... rich, poor, weak, strong... we all get the experiences of good and the not good... and the sensitive ones, write it down, like you and we here.

02-04-2010 at 01:37:56 PM

RE: Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.

depends on which voice I'm listening to that day, as to what topic I decide to write on. Is it that incredibly sexy voice, that drives me out of my mind saying write something for me baby... or is it my own voice saying, hmmm what I nice bible story, I should be inspired to write about that...

02-04-2010 at 02:58:58 PM

RE: Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.

Hmmm...great question. Well, for me it can be anything that begins a poem. Sometimes its a conversation that I've had. It also happens from listening to music, reading the Bible,articles, looking at nature. It could be just about anything! Sometimes its everything and nothing at all. Sometimes its just as simple for me as picking up the pen and something just does happen. An out of body experience and the words just begin to poor out onto the page. And then TADA... a poem is born!

- MagicRock

02-04-2010 at 11:54:04 PM

RE: Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.

Thank you for contributing. Your answers are certainly interesting. They also are starting to prove what I suspected, writing poems can be quite personal. Although themes can be similar, the content is unique and individual. Thanks again.

02-09-2010 at 08:57:57 AM

RE: Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.


I prefer structure, though I do sometimes write free form.

Usually something will happen...a chance encounter, a bit of of conversation that leads to a phrase that catches my attention. Sometimes it's a long labor; hours, days, months. I hate that kind. If it's that much work I tend to lose interest. Most of the time, though, if the original phrase that stuck was true, the rest of the piece slides out easily and almost intact. Then I put it away and don't read it for several hours or even a couple of days. Then I do whatever editing is necessary.

Ultimately, yes, I suppose I listen to the voice in my head. Usually it's the dulcet tones of my Muse.

Peace.
JL

02-09-2010 at 02:00:21 PM

RE: Opinion on free form or all forms of poetry to gain insight on others.

J- I'm sure there are others but you are only the second person that I have encountered here that claims to work on a single poem for more than a day. I find that most interesting. To have that much invested in one work to me is mind bottling, yes mind bottling, you know like when your thought are racing and get trapped ..like in a bottle. Anyway..I know I do not have the patience to write that way. If there is something in my head it drives me mad until I get it out. Sometimes I can write something in a matter of minutes other times an hour but never more than that, unless I'm writing a short story. Thanks for the insight and response, talk at ya' later, A.T.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.