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Night Has FallenI just sit here staring |
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Re: Night Has FallenOreo,,,,,,,,,,,,,This is a very good poem,,i can feel every word ,,love can be sharp as a knife,,i truely relate to your work ,,Thank you,,,Niteman. |
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Re: Night Has FallenThank you always for your kind words and inspiration Niteman!..U can call me Debbie |
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Re: Night Has FallenDebbie,,you are so welcome,,each poem i read of yours has so much meaning to me,,you have a gift and i could read your poems forever,,keep up the great work and know in your heart that you are a great writer,,thank you ,,,Niteman. |
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Originally Posted by oreo5560 I just sit here staring off into somewhere- where I dont know I feel frozen inside,so cold fighting the tears that rim my eyes and sting my soul Ah it was-all against the rules so now I pay a price I suppose heartache and saddness is just? it must cause thats what I feel and I dont know what it will take for this kind of pain to heal At least for me in my lifetime When did loving someone become so bad? isnt there enough hate in this world to be had? I just wanted to give my heart to you and all "we" were missing in our lives too You made it safe for me to do so You've always made me feel safe A warm soft place to fall,you were and i wanted to be that place for you as well Afraid now to turn around in fear of seeing the hard ground my only place to fall now I'm so cold,from head to toe nothing seems to warm me The night has fallen I see darkness out this window I staren out of Like the darkness thats between us now How much more can i possibly cry I just want to get through tonight tomorrows just another day I'll fight to understand why Im losing my best friend/ this just cant be why can't I make this right Flashes of you crash against my brain and I have no control it never seems to stop but i need a break my mind and heart need some rest Its morning and it all starts again! |
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Re: Night Has FallenOreo, |
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Re: Night Has FallenThank you for your thoughtful words and it does help-also knowing others feel what u do or at least have felt and that people understand..Thank you for taking the time to post something to me...Debbie |
Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.
Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.