I'd really appreciate the help.
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I'd really appreciate the help.I know that mostly you're supposed to put a poem here, and people can critique it on this post, but I don't really have time to move all my poems to this forum. I don't post my poems so that people can go "I like it" or "I hate it, you suck." I only post for critiques, not opinions. If you guys could pleeeease visit my page and critique even ONE of my poems I'd really appreciate it. All I'm looking for is to learn to be a better writer, because I know I'm still an amatuer. |
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Re: I'd really appreciate the help.Quote: Originally Posted by AlphaSmart I know that mostly you're supposed to put a poem here, and people can critique it on this post, but I don't really have time to move all my poems to this forum. I don't post my poems so that people can go "I like it" or "I hate it, you suck." I only post for critiques, not opinions. If you guys could pleeeease visit my page and critique even ONE of my poems I'd really appreciate it. All I'm looking for is to learn to be a better writer, because I know I'm still an amatuer. Thank you so much in advance. I'll return the favor to anyone who comments! Ok... let's help each other 
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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA