for her---2001.....

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    for her---2001.....
    her eyes said hi
    her soft skin so inviting
    I hung on every word that came
    from between her full red lips.
    her scent was subtle and sweet
    like a rose garden on a warm summer day.
    every move of her perfect body
    mesmerized me and captured my breathe
    does she know, can she see it?
    my smile went unmoved
    every glance at her lightened the soul
    when her smooth hands touched my skin
    it danced with excitement.
    does she know, can she see it?
    young and tender
    so much good, so much to offer
    a fair maiden for some lucky prince.
    one deep look in her big beautiful eyes
    can tell so much.
    this maiden should be a princess
    and she can be,
    withthe right tender touch.
    does she know?
    can she see it?

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    jademelissa74 commented on for her---2001.....

    08-09-2009

    The imagery used to create this piece is simply exquisite. I love the passion in which you convey you feelings. Great job.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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