FLOWERS AND A CARD

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    FLOWERS AND A CARD

    MOM LEFT A DISTURBING MESSAGE ON THE ANSWERING MACHINE. MY SISTER GAVE BIRTH TO A CRACK BABY,SOCIAL SERVICES TOOK THE KID. I HATE REAL FUCKING LIFE.THOUGHT ABOUT GOING DOWN TO THE HOSPITAL.UNABLE TO COME UP WITH A GOOD STRATEGY,MAYBE I WILL SEND HER A SYMPATHETIC CARD AND SOME FLOWERS,A REAL HALL-MARK DRENCHED POEM.GO WITH THE FLOWERS. HOSPITAL,NURSES,DOCTORS.DEATH COMES TRUE HERE.ROOM212MOM SITS BY THE WINDOW.SISTER CRYING IN BED,I HUGGED THEM,PUT THE FLOWERS IN SOME WATER. EVEN HALL-MARK DOESN'T HAVE A CARD FOR THIS KIND OF OCCASION

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on FLOWERS AND A CARD

    07-29-2010

    I like the honesty in the poem, I have to admit that is a very depressing situation. I don't think there are words from other people for this moment, and Hall-Mark is words from other people. I like the reality because it is not always happy or even ok.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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