Flower Man II

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    Flower Man II
    Flower man stands by the stop sign
    Sellin' roses two for five
    We have a little arrangement
    The flower man and I

    I roll up, slide down the window
    He plucks out two for five
    He knows I'm in a hurry
    Waves as I go by

    The flower man doesn't know she can't
    Watch roses fade and die
    She told me weeks ago
    Said they made her cry

    I don't know why I buy them still
    Two bunches for a five
    Maybe cause the flower man
    Still waves as I go by.

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    lightcourier commented on Flower Man II

    05-03-2009

    Beautiful sequel. Nice form and imagery. I really like your use of allegory. Thanks!
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