First Love

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First Love

She finally got her guy
he finally saw her smile
He finally got her heart
she finally got her wish
Now they'll never be apart
they know each other better then themselves
But they'll get to know each other better
forever and forever
So now we have to end this sweet sogn of love

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jerseycrtz commented on First Love

06-12-2010

I dont think I helped write this, but still really good. We have awesome friends. :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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First Love 1
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