Finding True Love

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    It only takes one person in your life to make you feel complete

    Finding True Love
    He knew he found his soul as he looked in to the eyes of Her's
    He knew he had finally found love when he wrapped his arms around her fragile and frail body
    When she thought she was weak
    He made her feel strong
    She thought she was impossible
    He made her feel invincible
    When She thought there was no one else
    He still stood right there
    He took her hand and told her
    Yes this is real love
    Don't be scared
    Take my hand and I will lead you
    Please dont feel as you must follow
    But I rather you walk beside me
    Cause your the one I want
    You may feel as if you are broken
    Trust me your not
    You may feel weak
    Which I know you are not
    You are the one I want standing beside me
    For now and for always
    Will you be my wifey
    For now and For always

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    Tempy commented on Finding True Love

    09-25-2009

    how sweet. i like how you wrote it in red. I always wished i could write in colours.
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    1TouchOfPerfect

    09/26/2009

    its very easy look at the top tool bar and you can change everything there to edit the way you type colors and all

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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