fathers day......connected to summer solstice

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    fathers day......connected to summer solstice

     Sunday morning.......
             fathers day.........dirt under my nails....
    more fruit and flowers bloom.............
                 3 phone calls.........3 sons
                                  shane.....jeff........jeremy sky.............
    it is...........the longest day!.......................solstice............
                                         celebrate the sun/son................ 
    she can't be me..........
                        she wants to sew her shadow to the soles of my peter pan feet...............
                             she can't be me................
    these are 2 thoughts..........2 poems

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    DLSmith commented on fathers day......connected to summer solstice

    06-22-2009

    I don't know a whole lot about form and all that, and I honestly didn't know where I was going when I started reading this, but I like where it went. I love how the words intertwined, I can't say it any other way.....Great work on these two pieces of art:)
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    warmakeswar

    06/23/2009

    hey, thanks!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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