Fate

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  • Emotional

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this in high school

    Fate

     My motivation has left me,
    All teary eyed I sit and wait
    for his return to set me free
    I soon unvail our fate.

    She spreads her wings and flys afar
    A black angel trys to anew her ways
    She left with an anguishing scar
    Shes left to fly alone for days.

    Her heart is weakend from the thought of him
    A picture of him she always keeps
    The memories will never dim
    A single tear is all she weeps.

    Soon again Ill hold his hand
    Obession is a word I always find
    Togeather again I understand
    Even apart were togeather in mind.

    ~Beautiful Pollution

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    ansari commented on Fate

    05-27-2010

    Very retrospective. Many of us have gone through these days, your emotions are mirrored. human feelings are deep and when truly touched gets carved in your heart, being your shadow in life. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you. a 10 from me
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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