Faithful

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    Faithful

     I sit watching you and wondering what is your name?
    I'm too shy to ask.I guess I am the one to blame.
    I sit and wonder when I do ask will it be to late?
    Or do we belong cause of fate?
    And then one day you walk up to me.
    And tell me your name I guess we were ment to be.
    And as the days go by we get closer.
    And you tell me "I love you."
    I want this to be true.
    And then one day I will walk in my white dress and say I do.
    Because you are the one I will be faithful to.

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    Lunesca commented on Faithful

    07-21-2009

    very nice. i kinda feel this way right now and am hoping it will turn out the same way
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    nu2ya2000 commented on Faithful

    07-04-2009

    AWW. thats a sweet poem. I love how you start it. it makes the reader want to continue readings simply to learn the ending
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    hotgirl

    07/04/2009

    thank you for the comment.please read more.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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