extistances..

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  • Sadness

    extistances..

    sitting in this room...
    LOST...
    questions pop into my brain..
    flowing from south to north like the nile river..

    was she really.. in
    LOVE?
    with me?

    i wish i could do it all over again..
    jus turn off the game..
    and press........
    RESET..

    start all over again..
    but,
    its not that easy..

    when she broke it off..

    i felt total obliteration..
    how am i suppose to feel...

    loving..
    to
    losing..
    to
    nothing..

    it makes me question my exitstance..

    why am i here..

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    Sx9 commented on extistances..

    04-20-2009

    real speak to ever one,,walk good
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    mmichelle97219 commented on extistances..

    02-13-2009

    Again not so poetic as there is no meter, but a beautifully sad monologue. Nice work. Michelle
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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